Reviews for Songs of a Psyche
Sunlit Rain chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Hmm, very simple, but interesting. Haunting in a way. Your choice of words is kind of bland, but with the right intonation and music, could make a very good song.
Colorain chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Okay, you'd better go record this. Like, NOW. It's that good.

Taylor Marin chapter 6 . 3/17/2003
::nods approvingly:: Another excellent one. You have talent and certainly make good use of it. The ending on this is just brilliant!

Taylor Marin chapter 5 . 3/17/2003
Hm... This one's not my favorite, I don't think. You definitely need to up the rating on your songs collection, though, to at least a pg.

Taylor Marin chapter 4 . 3/17/2003
OO, very nice. Ends a bit abruptly, but I loved it otherwise.

Taylor Marin chapter 3 . 3/17/2003
Hm... I like this better than the others. (I didn't review the second, because I couldn't think of a way to comment...) It conveys some the sentiments very well. Only comment I'd have is that, unless this is a really fast song, it'd be good if you got rid of some of those choruses. Maybe splice a verse or two so that you have the equivalent of two of the current verses and only one chorus... It just seems like a bit too much as is. Again, good job!

Taylor Marin chapter 1 . 3/17/2003
Definitely rather abstract, but I think I know what you mean. Certainly well-written, to say the least! Good job!