Great imagery and powerful words! Good job!

God I love your vocabulary, and love the imagery! Great job! It's not like how people would usually write about the rose and love, which makes it awesome. Keep writing!

woven emotion...very nice
review me back please

Wow. This is some truely powerful writing.

Fantastic

This has great imagery. Beautifully written!

I like the way you wrote the poem. YOu have a deep vocabulary I must say. Pretty cOOL. ) It's like taken out from a novel.. The poem that is.

morbid, but creative. nice choice of words.

rr some of my stuff if you ever get the time

Wow. This poem is amazing. Descriptions to end all descriptions - *I* was being ripped by the thorns after falling off my frightening "night mare" (nice allusion to that). I feel wounded by this...but in an irrevocably good way. Excellent.

~Zephyr

Wow. I love the vivid imagery, it really brings your ideas to life.

This was really good I liked it alot.

I like how you say the :encaged queen:

meaning the rose but could also be the feeling you get when in a relationship sometimes.

really good.

Please review some of my stuff if you would.

-tears up- sorry, i'm rather emotional right now, read the poem i wrote Fancy and you'll see why. Anyways, this was very well writen and I rather liked it. Angsty stuff is just what i'm in the mood for. I love using the rose for metaphoric purposes- rather ingenious. No matter how beautiful love is, it hurts as much as being pricked by a thorn. Keep up the good work.

~Never willing to cave into others' beliefs just to fit in...Tyche Shadows~

this is brilliant! its really good!

One word: Wow.

This is incredibly artistic, it's beautiful, it's... just great. *adds to favourites*