Reviews for CS
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
beautiful poem...defintely reminds me of a computer game, maybe counter strike? or it could be about cybering, i dunno, but either way i like it, very emotional and the chorus has a flow to it that i like, excellent job
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Ja, ist wirklich interessant. So vom Stil her gefält's mir sehr gut. Ich könnte jetzt auch raten, worum's geht und mein Tipp wär "Cyber Sex", aber andererseits ist das Gedicht etwas zu harmlos für so ein Thema...also keine Ahnung, ob ich damit richtig liege oder total daneben. *g*

cio, hoellenwauwau
Jenny Rocker chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
Very intriguing. You certainly got me to read this through 3 times, thinking it over. Can't say I know what it's about, but there are some key words you use, like "net," "mainframe," "log in," sounds computer-like, but what exactly it's about, I've no clue. Which I think is excellent, I love your ambiguity. It's got a nice rhythm, I like it. It's very different and interesting.
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
It sounds like something to do with a computer. What is it? Good job putting it together. Keep writing...