Wow-
Short, but very good. Keep it up.

Wow-
Nicely done. I'm pretty sure you remember a pen name called Ice Demon. Well thats who you reviewed 3 years ago.
But what is past, is past. I thought this was really good.
I didn't give on writing, as you can see. I have struggled, but I think we all do.
You have a great knack for descriptions, and detail. Very cool, and well written.
Whispers In Silence

Hey what happened to the kid in the beginning. I saw a lot of changes but these are great. I cannot believe someone your age could write this, it is... unbelievable. Your knowledge of government... stuff is extensive, and your craft of writing is beautiful. Keep writing, this is HONESTLY the best I've seen in and this site. You will become famous. Please email me.