Reviews for Wild Spring
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Wow! I like how you made spring seem descrtuctive and wild, you described scenes very well in this one. The last line of the poems gives it the most effect. Good work again!

*Jenna*
Shadafakup chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
It certainly came out really well.. Very beautiful.. Good choice of words for the descriptions.. I liked the images you conjured up in my mind.. Nice poem, it came out real great.. Totally well captured.. Trust me.. )
Toireasa chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Excellent. The imagery was beautiful, the rhythym and flow wonderful-(I love flow!)-and an overall great poem. You have a great syntax, so props to you. Good job! Thanks for reviewing Lightning by the way.

~Toireasa
CrystalDreamer620 chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
*claps* very nice, very nice. good description, nice visualization...I love it! :)
Andaren chapter 1 . 4/3/2003
I like it!
Miamouse chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
really nice poem. I like how you managed to capture spring without getting sappy about newborn lambs et al.

Lovely poem

Mia :)
EgoDominusTuus chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
This was good! eeze ou can ttalk, walk and write poetry, i am amazed lol!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
very pretty poem about the coming of spring, excellent imagry, nicely done