|Reviews for China Doll|
| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
I like it...
especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought)
| MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
The title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think .
| NovaKayne chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Wow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up! I need more good poetry!
| coldslit chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
somehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done
| suicidel angel chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
short, too the point, and very deep. nice work.
| flash-rules chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Even though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing.
| Nevermore Forevermore chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
I like it. You're a good writer.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
Heart of the Sword
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Very emotional. REally.
| Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
Very cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend.
i love the title China doll, too.
| aleppine chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
I love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
interesting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done
| Nerilka-chan chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
Nice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan
| Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
Wow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk.
| MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
Wow, short, but good. _ Keep writing.