Reviews for Dedication
Toast n Guitars chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Hey Yorun... and you said you went a good poet! I happen to think you are a good poet.
Saiouri17 chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
Not bad..pretty good in fact.
Intra chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Eh, I'm a sucker for poetry. ;; j0, Yorun. It's Duo, Leo's friend? O.o Anyways, I really like this. It's beautiful, and somehow sad. Good job all in all. Ja ne! -runs away-
sum guy chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
it's a start. but if you really want to make better poems u should do a few things. first of all, its very short, some are good short, so may b thats ok. but if u want to make it better and if u want to rhyme u shouldn't use such weak rhymes. try using bolder words, look in the thesaraus or sumthing. jus a hint