Reviews for Close My Eyes
MorbidTruth chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
I love it. It reminds me of the Vampire Chronicles by Anne Rice. It's wonderful, keep it up!
Oath chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
i personally don't like the concept of: black is evil and light is good but it is used frequently and i don't see how it could be avoided so, i give it up with that. Your poem was amazing after that point. So the two lovers killed themselves with a dagger to proserve their love instead of have others destroy it? Beautifuly modbid ending.
Etheral chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
This is beautiful! It's just amazing, a truly brilliant poem! great job!
Lavender Knight chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
OMG! This had a wonderful touch of brilliance to it. I sat there reading just feeling that moment between the two of them. It was the righteous side of poetry and you've earned the praise you're going to recieve in reviews. It just has that Dark and light interwine flavour that really catches.
Excellent work!
Amauros Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
That was pretty 0D ...I think you should put up more of your poems and stories
Thrones chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
Oh, Jonny, this is amazing! It's so sad, but I love it; you just snatched up the hopelessness of the situation and ran away with it! I love it! You're awesome! XD!


Artemis Astralstar chapter 1 . 3/20/2003
this is amazing, you set the scene so perfectly i could see it.

keep it up