Reviews for Poem One
arachibutyrophobia chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
its so quiet and sad...beautiful imagery, really reinforces the message/mood. Well done.

Lemon Drop chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
I hope this isn't about your childhood.

I like the way you describe the sounds of the swing...I can imagine myself there, and your imagery is wonderful.

Keep up the good work!

Ninsetta Tristel Sundar chapter 1 . 9/3/2003
very sad but good
child-dragon chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
EErie. Very haunting. Great emotional impact on it. Well done.
ElvenRanger chapter 1 . 7/16/2003

That was so sad and beautiful. I love sad things. Great job.
Mystified chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
I love the analogy you developed with the swing. Brilliant.
Animagess chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
A tad on the dark and quietly haunting side.. But then, that's probably what the effect was intended to be. Not bad.
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
That was unbelievably sad. And yet beautiful...