Reviews for Last Breath
zoule chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
O I really like this idea. Please continue the story. I'll give you a present :P
Rhys chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Oh, this is interesting! Continue...uhh, when you have the time, I s'pose! _

...Hm. It's occured to me that I've become a serial reviewer. Mwaha. Fear me.
The Fallen Caryatid chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
Youre joking, right? There has to be more of this soon! I really like it, it sounds like an excellent plot idea. I'm looking forward to more chapters!

Hopefully you'll update it, whether or not Mack, Charlie, and Ten decide to cooperate. Speaking of them, when will you post the next chapter to 'Beyond Friends'? My friend Risa is totally hooked on it...
Karasu Tendo chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Well, if the muses don't listen and you can't update this soon, then I'm going to track them all down and force them to! 'Cause this is cool! *tries to look imposing* Obey Rae, ye muses!

*hopes it worked*
stokes chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Hey, Good Start! I liked it and enjoyed it. I wouldn't mind seeing where this story leads. The only negative I would point out is that the Serpents Staff foreshadowing was a bit too strong! Other then that it was good.
A.H chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Wonderful! fantastic! I love it! I hope you do eventually continue it.

But continue the other stories first! You must! Ten and John were good while you were gone. Very good. _