|Reviews for Holier than Thou|
| IcanzIIravor chapter 15 . 5/4/2016
Good story. Hopefully you finish it one day:)
| honey splattered brains chapter 15 . 4/2/2011
.. six years later. i am so sad. oh well. i love this story though. :D
| Electric Monk chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
Neither a PhD in Quantum Physics nor a medical student in residency would come anywhere close to being to afford a 76,0/year apartment. Residency pays shit, and unless a finance firm really wanted a PhD Quantum Physics guy for their staff then the only plausible positions are research and teaching at a university or perhaps some government work. Finance is, oh, an 80 hour a week job and nothing else would pay for that apartment.
Although a cardiac surgeon could probably afford a 76,0/year apartment (a smart one would put a payment on a condo or co-op, or live in a really horrible apartment to save money for aforementioned co-op/condo) a resident does not make enough money to do so.
You put details in the story, you have to justify them (no old Honda would fetch 5 grand from a NYC car dealer, for that matter). You, obviously, didn't bother to figure out what these people made nor what people in their situation would do in a real estate market like NYC.
Other than that you have a decent premise going on, but—alas—it appears you stopped writing it a long time ago. Too bad, and I hope you still write.
| DorkExpress chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This story is one I love, and to tell you the truth, it sucks that you haven't kept it going... I hope you do...
| Chelsea Grin chapter 15 . 6/10/2010
nice story! i really liked it.. you write well do continue]
| mussed chapter 15 . 1/22/2010
its been FIVE YEARS since you updated. i was still in fifth grade at that time.
i just can't wrap my brain around. crazy.
you MUST update this or something. c'mon, for old times' sake.
ya know you want to...
okay so trying to bribe you with a written comment won't realy do anything good for me but a girl can try can she?
anyways, try i will until i dry up and shrivel by the road.
i can't wait to know what happens next with morgan and jason but hell, you might be even married now... nah i'm just kidding but you never know...
i'm reading your reviews now and only 2 people commented on 2009, 7 on 2008, 14 on 2007... GAH, i am that bored but seriously you should update. seriously.
| TumbleWeed23 chapter 14 . 12/27/2009
DUDE you NED to update...we need jason and morgan going gaga over each other...now!...please? :-D
| Joelynda chapter 15 . 5/27/2009
I love this story...but I'm beginning to doubt your claim of finishing it so I think I'll resist the urge to re-read it without the ending..
| Duuude chapter 15 . 11/24/2008
Ah. I loved this so much! I didn't want to get into it because I knew there was a long wait for the next update. But it was so worth it!
I've become totally obsessed with Jason. I mean, I've had the hots for fictional people before but never at such epic porportions. You have magic. That is all I have to say.
And Morgan and Jason are so perfect for each other. I think the title fits the story so perfectly. They both think they're too good for people and for each other. But they're exactly the same!
I can't wait for their chemistry to grow. And you left us at the ultimate cliff-hanger, dude. How could you do that? Finny just showed up! BTW, I love the name Phinnaeus. It's awesome.
And omgsh. I laughed for an hour, I had to close my laptop to get my bearings when he said "hey man, do you wanna marry me?"
Instant love. Seriously, my love just turned on suddenly. I love Jason!
I can't wait to find out more. Please update soon. Don't shrivel up my poor hooked heart.
Ahh. Sorry about your break-up, I'm probably ages too late. But I couldn't help but laugh, and you said you had trouble being funny afterwards. Your A/N was hilarious. Jason turning gay and something to with the mafia. HAHAHAHAH!
You are genius. Seriously. Update soon!
| kamicoh chapter 15 . 10/8/2008
hey...this story is awesome and you really have to finish it...please please pretty please.o) hope u get over ur writer's block...this story is just way too good to be unfinished.o)
| OrientalEmerald chapter 15 . 9/26/2008
I really love this story. I hope you do end up completing it even though it has been 3 years since you updated... 'cause this is way too good to end up unfinished and lost in the bowels of fictionpress!
| goodbyemylover chapter 15 . 6/8/2008
i read this entire story in one sitting and i love it!
it's totally different from everything else i've read, and i really hope you update because i want to know what happens with finny, and of course with morgan and jason.
keep up the great work!
| AMM3485 chapter 15 . 4/18/2008
Great story! I love the character dynamics! I hope you update soon and that you plan to finish this story!
| AMM3485 chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Your authors note made me giggle!
| sunflowersing chapter 13 . 1/1/2008
I need to tell you that I am absolutely OBSESSED with this story! I love it so much. The problem is, I can't seem to access the next two chapters on my computer or on my phone. It's an error and I am dying! Ahhrgh! I don't know why I am telling you this besides the fact that you haven't updated in a couple of years, and I KNOW you haven't finished the story yet. So what is going on? Please fill me in. Thank you! And UPDATE!