freaky how her dreams mixes in with real life, how she gets that note in her locker very cool, please update soon, BUHBAI!

interesting story. i would like to know more about her other life. perhaps you could give a few more hints on the guy she's suppose to marry?

I love the plot and the mystery of the character, but I feel that you aren't putting enough in your chapters. Maybe its just because I'm impatient. I've really got to work on that. Write lots more A.S.A.P.

OMG! I luv it! If u write more soon, i'll luv you 4ever!

This was REALLY cool! I have a feeling this story is gonna be an awesome one!

Seems kind of like Amelia Atwater-Rhodes book "Demon In My View".

I think Elena and Alexander should be long-lost, resurrected loves, only she doesn't know he's from another planet called Magick.

I liked the beginning, it sets the mood for the whole story (or the portion that's been submitted so far).

I like the true-to-life relationship Elena has with her sister. That stuff always happens to me and my little sister!