Hello.

That was, in general, a great poem. In some parts I got the feeling it didn't quite work so well... but that's maybe just me. No, I'm not able to pick out the bits I liked and I didn't like, sorry.

I loved the last verses (verses? whatever they are called anyway), they were...perfect.

-KKi

This is exactly how I feel w/ one of my friends except sometimes I'm afraid that I might be the one doing those things. I love the poem, it's beautiful.