Reviews for My Heroine hehe, play on words
TheKraft chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
The poem displays emotions very well, knowing the danger of a love, but unable (unwilling) to do anything about it. Like "Alice and the Red Queen," I thought it was great how you managed to show such empathy.
MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
Nicely done. Veyr emotional. I like the good play on words. Heroine and heroine. Hee? ;;
Sachiko Productions chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
hey first off that is really good and 2nd ty for your review _ i like critcicm(if this sounds like sarcasm gomen) ill try to improve the story but hey it was just an intro but i liked this you know how to catch true dark emotions.