|Reviews for Games of the Heart|
| Mirandamau chapter 29 . 12/30/2021
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| Neo Rulez chapter 1 . 2/18/2018
You totally got me hooked into this story. I cannot wait to see what awaits!
| Night-Rayne chapter 19 . 10/18/2008
Wow this is really good, I can't wait for the next, though I hope Chris explains what he did soon
| Blazequeen chapter 19 . 7/21/2008
Wow. This is what I have always wanted to read in the wierd girl makeover story. The truth. You make it crystal clear that it isn't a painless process or a particularly positive one sometimes. I love the way you weave in the emotions and thoughts.
I would like to ask, however, if there was any way you could more clearly mark a POV shift. It gets just a tad confusing in the reading.
| Freakage chapter 19 . 2/22/2008
This is so amazing. I love the characters and their multidimensional and changing attitudes. Thank you so much - I'm definitely favourite-ing this!
| Aragorn is mine chapter 19 . 2/1/2008
girl scouts honour? then you must live up to your word :D
| last minute rush chapter 19 . 1/17/2008
You finally updated P Thank you thank you thank you!
Absolutely love it! But please no more long absences anymore? Pretty please? lolz.
Poor Chris though T_T I feel so sorry for him. He feels so torn but Selina has to find out. Though I know that Selina's not going to be happy when she finds out argh can't wait for next chap!
| violet-eyez chapter 19 . 1/17/2008
so is she going to fall for chris
| Julieell093 chapter 19 . 1/14/2008
hey great chapter i cryed at chris' speech its really sweet i cant wait for your next chapter[:
| YaYaLeE chapter 19 . 1/14/2008
NEED MORE DAVID!
he's one of the best characters. I like him better than Chris. Please bring David back!
| wandless chapter 19 . 1/14/2008
Yay, update! I'm enjoying this story but I think the chapters are bit too long. Your writing is quite heavy and it takes a long time to get through, I usually end up skimming a bit. And I'm a really fast reader, and I read a lot, too. That's odd to be saying that, usually I'm telling people to write more!
It's a nice change to actually not know who the main character's going to end up with. Both guys are pretty cool.
Please update soon!
| Daphne.Claire chapter 18 . 1/11/2008
i absolutely love this story, i love chris, if i was to picture my soul mate his image would probably come to mind. i love selina just hate the fact that she got manipulated, i mean honestly thats one point i don't understand. i mean she is really smart and you would think that she would have questioned the things Dave said to her, i mean wouldnt it appear odd to her that whenever she was in vincity of Dave he was always talking about how weird she was and how she need to change and how she needed to stop being a rug. i mean if selina was a rug before she is like a prada scarf wrapped around her peers fingers, but i don't know thats just me. and isnt it odd how she's always in the wrong and its her fault for not being accepted, i mean if she has to dress a certain way to be accepted then shouldn't that tell her something, i mean if those people are more concerned about whats on her body than whats in her head you than you would think that she would question those people but i guess not.
the only thing really pissing me off is that Chris, even when he brought this on himself is complaining. honestly when selina finds out about this, and i know she will because Chris is to honest and he would not waste a friend like that, i don't think she is ever going to talk to Dave or Chris ever again. and i really don't blame her, i would probably be the same way, maybe even move to another country.i would probably hate Dave (not that i didn't from the beginning) but be depressed that my friend would think like other people that i needed to change.
i know most people would say oh you shouldn't hate Dave that much i mean he was just doing a favor for his cousin, but honestly doe she have any sort of morals, and he continued to do it even though he knew there was nothing in selina that needed to be changed.
anyway before i start ranting i want to tell you how wonderful your story is you are an excellent writer, the story flows fluently and there aren't any grammar mistakes (i haven't caught 1). i really hope that you decide to finish the story, its too good of a story not to finish.
| violet-eyez chapter 18 . 11/2/2007
is she gonna end up with chris or david
| last minute rush chapter 18 . 10/3/2007
Wah, poor Chris!
*pat pat* She's still there, dont give up on her D
Aw, sucha cute story. But...the last update was...the beginning of this year '( Please update soon?
You're an amazing author, I could actually feel the emotions they're going through. Man, though Chris should'nt have asked Dave to do that to Selina, you still feel sorry for him.
Please please please update? *does the best imitation of puss in boots*
| ADdict chapter 18 . 8/26/2007
I just finished this story and I must say I am very impressed.
I really feel for Selina, and I almost want to knock Chris upside the head for being so slow...
Nate is great (I rhymed!) and David needs some adjustment to his moral compass.
All in all, it has been an interesting journey, and I look forward to reading more.