Reviews for RainFall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i think this story is excellent. its really really good! i added it to my community group. if you'd like to check out the group, feel free! i have a story paranormal agency on there too if youre interested. thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The introduction pulled me in, and I like the little poem in the beginning, also :) This looks like it's going to be a good read. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was... , I can't stand horror I couldn't stop reading this 's one of the best stories I've read in a while. I think if you edited it, and changed around a few of the words (I noticed you began using the same adjective repeatedly in the same paragraph/sentence/chapter, so I think you need to change a few of them) you'd have a really good chance of getting this that's said with all seriousness. Thanks for a great read :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one of the scariest things I have ever was fantastic though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, one the best stories i have ever read. Very very nice, 10/10. |
![]() ![]() Nothing more to say except... wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I think that's all I've got to say. That and that was one hell of a long story you have here. Long, and brilliant. I don't know how long it's taken me to read this, I had to sit down and read some of it every night for weeks. But this is brilliant, and well worth the number of times my behind has fallen asleep. The characters are interesting, even though my favourite was the cop, she was cool. And I like the way you pull it all together. One of the best and most entertaining reads I've had in ages. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY HELL IM NOT EVEN 3 chapters into it and im hooked but im gettin scared of losing all my time to this, OMG ITs long |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude. ... Like, whoa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. Didn't want it to end |
![]() ![]() ok, THAT was disturbing, and sorta Stephen Kingesque |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure, but this sounds really good... I'm gonna see how this goes. It looks promising! *grins happily* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow...Great story...with a wonderfully haunting ending! (I won't say anymore about it for those who haven't read it yet). Just...amazing peice of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great ending. woot, nice. and now to make everyone I know read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This was an amazing story - I loved reading it. Excellent job :) |