|Reviews for chrysanthemums|
| Faye Coon chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
White flowers - yea. The Chinese WOULD do that. (I would know) Chrysanthemums are so apropriate, eh? Why a funeral among ghosts, I should have hoped it would only be family. Or yea, i suppose friends of him and such. Well, er, a close ghost. Not so bad I guess. That means they understnad better!
I liked your poem!
| zendska not signed in chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
oh my word...brilliant! i'm sorry i would offer constructive criticism but i cant :P the last two stanzas especially are inspired!
| miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 3/30/2003
that's so beautiful
*dies of speechlessness/an inferiority complex*
*forces someone to bury her grave in roses- so sick so ill from
chrysanthemums while simultaneously adding the poem to favorites*
| Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
*falls over chair* The image of his eyes that "grow large and ill, and photosensitive, and prone
to glowing like white flowers"
AH. *dies again and again and again*
| superspy chapter 1 . 3/26/2003
i like this a lot. chrysanthemums are sweet flowers.
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 3/23/2003
my only question is
who 'he' is this time,
or is it a general 'he'
and if so I think I want chrysanthemums
funeral as well
just so I can have poetry
written about me.