Reviews for Innocent Sin
Marshmallow chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
I'm 14 years late I read this on July 6 2017 and this story is absolutely amazing I wish it would have continued it. It really cought my interest it makes me want to draw the characters and make an anime out of it I am going to be 13 years old as of this year and yes I wasn't even born when this author wrote this. But I hope it makes a major come back
AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 4 . 4/18/2009
Ah! Omg! x! I
ngt chapter 4 . 3/6/2007
update this great story!
Pale Onyx chapter 4 . 1/16/2007
a thrilling story. a violent yet interesting plot. hunting yet contenting. it's darkness is terrifying, i really like your story. hopefully you can update soon...
Mugzie chapter 4 . 7/2/2006
Dude! THAT HAD ME SHAKING! MORE!
Mytheos chapter 4 . 9/20/2004
Won't you please continue? As Lucifer-sama said "The game had finally begun"
Cute Little Mongoose chapter 4 . 7/11/2004
this story is just so cute! i kind of ilke lucifer but then i don't i really don't konw...we.
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Cute Little Mongoose chapter 3 . 7/11/2004
i love this story it's so cute! yup love love love!
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Cute Little Mongoose chapter 2 . 7/11/2004
how cute! itoh and shizu are so cute! i want a brother and sister like them!
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Cute Little Mongoose chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
wow! it's so cool. i must read more! more more more!
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Neechi chapter 4 . 5/22/2004
*smile* Oh! Finish it or I'll eat you.
Rawr.
~ A Very Tired Nee
golden-flame4 chapter 4 . 3/14/2004
omg... this story is so god! MORE! althought shizu seems to love itoh in a very over protective sense... could even be twisted into incest? :S ah well... great story tho :) keep up the good work :D
Andi-Lynne chapter 4 . 12/30/2003
Wow.. This story is really captivating. I love how you have Lucifer in it, and it's so deep and intricate. It almost reminds me of the Subtle Knife series, whith the angels in the end... Maybe I'm thinking of something else. Anyway, I've always loved this sort of thing, and I applaud you in the marvelous job you've done so far. Keep up the good work!
star chapter 2 . 12/2/2003
Immortalize Itoh, and Shizu when she gets a little bit older! You have to do it while Itoh is still a teenager! Bishounen.
Chaotic Child chapter 4 . 11/29/2003
cool. update soon!
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