Reviews for Darkness
Icarus Sun chapter 1 . 3/23/2003
"The soul is starved/ And slowly rots/...swallow me whole darkness/"

I liked those lines best.

The rest wasn't that great; it felt like it was reaching for something and not quite grasping it.

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spider06 chapter 1 . 3/23/2003
Nice choice of words. I like it-Spider