This Maaderis character is sure stubborn, fickle and a bit harsh I have to say, but I really think this is getting somewhere, definitely bring it into the novel.

p.s. witchcraft is way cool eh? yeah all the way

HEY,

this is a good story! keep up the good work! i think my favorite character would have to be Trenna! cause she is so mystrious! and she can see into the future! hope you update soon this is good real good!

Your Friend,

Amanda