Reviews for City Tale
britt-lipy chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
wow, that was excellent. your words flow beautifully. i liked it a lot, sad as it was. good job!

Sye chapter 1 . 5/15/2003

keep writing
Sye chapter 1 . 5/15/2003

keep writing
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
I liked the intensity you showed here.

~Heart of the Sword
Kingdoms chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
nice, sad because it's true in many cases but nicely written. Thnaks for reviewing my stuff.
Lounalune chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
Really good!
SinNombre26 chapter 1 . 4/3/2003
thats really really cool, but it tells such a sad story. but beautiful writing, keep it up

gonefornow chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
Great poetry, I love your writing style.
May chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
This girl leads such a miserable life!
Nonki chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
A sad poem, that is. Overall, a good written one.

Why not give us some happy poems to let us know that you are now feeling happy and way okay! can?

Keep writing! _