SPORTS ARE EVIL I TELLS YA! but you allready knew that or you wouldnt have written this anyways... this is good stuff! You should be a writer...well...if you get over that-"never-finish-a-story" part...lol

how true! i absoulutly dispise gym! it SUX! grr.

lol!

Rhapsody

so true

really good

screw the sports peeps lol

I like gym. I guess everyone has their own opinion. I can't see why you wouldn't like it. *shrugs* This haiku was ok, I guess...

Just one thing: lay off the ellipses! No offense... (see! I use them too!) just too many of them all together like that drives me crazy. Other then that, it's amazing. Reminds me of "Myron the Nazi," the trainer at my school. I hate that man. My favorite part is the one that begins "running around in." Keep up the good work.

LOL the ending is very good!

You did such a good job showing your emotions.

I like your Haiku

Amen to that one. Nice work!

Heh. This was great work!

~Heart of the Sword

OMG! You are SO right Chassie!

Excelent piece of haiku!