|Reviews for To Chase a Thief|
| Kell Hound chapter 13 . 8/8/2003
great job keep writing
| Neris chapter 13 . 8/8/2003
oh, whats she gonna do now? And what is Aren's past? you better update soon, cause if you don't-lets just say I have connections...
| Cassi chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
I really have nothing to say but I have to get the 127th review. 127 is my number. *sheepish grin* Yeah, I'm a total idiot. But hey. Congrats on 127 reviews, may you get another 127. And here's hoping FP lets you post the chappie; I wanna read it!
| Bay710 chapter 12 . 8/4/2003
Great story .. I hope you update soon
| Songofthewind chapter 12 . 7/30/2003
This is a neat story so far. The rating does make me a little nervous, but I'm trusting you to keep it pretty clean, right?
Anyways, I like Colin - kind of makes me think of my little brother, really. And Jynx is a great name, by the way...
Write on, mellonamin, write on! ;)
~May the West wind guide your wings~
| Intuition chapter 12 . 7/30/2003
Oh I feel so bad! I already read this chapter long time ago but everytime I tried to review my computer would freeze and now I don't have a computer anymore! I'm on my sis's lap top and she doesn't really let me get on... Anyways, great chapter, as always;) Update soon!
| Lisa chapter 12 . 7/29/2003
Wow... I can't believe I didn't read this story earlier after my six months at Fictionpress. This story is nicely written: characterization and details are described carefully and effectively. I'll go add this to my favorites in my account later on.
Anyway, PLEASE update. It's been over a month since you last did! Oh yes, and before I go, my favorite character would have to be... Rhys. No idea why, but it just is. See ya.
| Neris chapter 12 . 7/27/2003
This is great! I can't wait till you update again. Please update soon!
P.S. My fav character is Kael
| starsignLeo chapter 12 . 7/24/2003
It's really good, and I can't wait to see who the romance will be with. I don't know why you don't like some of the chapters, I think they're all really good. Write more!
| Chaotic Child chapter 12 . 7/19/2003
cool! update soon!
| Chaotic Child chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
cool! I'll read the rest later!
| Miss Mei chapter 12 . 7/15/2003
| goodshiplollypop chapter 12 . 7/11/2003
Great characters. You give each of the boys a different mysterious aura. I can't wait to see whats next.
| vegaofthellyre chapter 12 . 7/11/2003
interesting chapter. i can barely wait until you update. hope it is soon. i like all of your characters, especially rhys. jynx is cool because of her mismatched eyes. well, update soon.
Keep at it.
| Laughing Cat chapter 12 . 7/9/2003
My first review for this story... *looks wistfully at the screen*
*Clears throat and blushes* OOps... heh... Anyway, having just finished catching up to the latest chapter, I just want to say how impressed I am so far. The blurb that I read by the link did not at ALL do it justice, and I was stunned by your graphic style that took me into the story and swept me away with the characters.
To answer your question, I think that my favorite character definitely has to be Jynx, and to answer a question you asked a while ago, I think that she and Rhys HAVE to get together, simply because he rescued her in the beginning. _
And now for a bit of literary suggestions (if you don't mind them)-
Don't forget that Jynx is a girl- going to the bathroom will definitly be amusing, I think, and it'll be an interesting scene when she gets her period. Also, if her binding ever slips loose, that could be a potentially unnerving situation, even if nobody notices.
And being the clean guys that they are, they might want to check her head to make sure that she doesn't have lice.
Back to the scheduled program...
I think that this is an awesome story so far, very humerous (I was laughing for ages) with witty characters and dialogue. I can't wait to see what you do with the church (do they post Missing Acolyte notices? *laughs*) and though I find it a bit surprising that she hasn't mentioned being worried about them searching for her or anything so far, that's probably just her character. Heh, that would be funny if they post a notice and the guys notice that what they can see of her matches her description...
I can't wait until she has to give a name, lol.
And... I'm rambling. Gomen, I'll end this review about now. If you don't mind, may I know your other names so that I could read your other stories, both on fictionpres and ? Thank you, I just enjoy reading what you write. _