Reviews for To Chase a Thief
Brenna chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
ahh. I love seeing my name in review-reply's.

Anyway, I don't think this chapter is so bad.

When I was reading my reply ans you said "not yet, not yet", umm..well I can't actually remember what I said... I was probably being pushy for romance (I'm very pushy like that), but I am also patient, so whatever happens...

Keep writing!

P.S. I still like Aren for Jynx...but, you know, it's you story...
San24 chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
Love it! _ Stories great and very well thought. I think you should have her with Rhys, but that's just me.
Maharanjoni chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
wouldn't her clothes be plastered against her body? Or was that taken care of by the chest binding?

Good chapter - its probably not as bad as you seem to think it is - although relativly little happens.

I can't wait for the next Chapter to come out! Update again soon!


"And Harry Potter and all his wizarding friends all went to hell for practicing witchcraft - The End." - The Simpsons
Giglio-Bianca chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
YAY! Now I'm so happy! Plus I don't think this chapter was so horrible. D
Kashmir89 chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
AH! I thought she was caught for a minute there! Whew. In a way, I kind of want them to find out she's a girl, but in another way I want them not to. What would they do if they found out? Anyways, I have a fav character! _ actually, I have 3 fav characters, but thats ok, right? I like Colin, Kael, and Jynx. Rhys is actually another of the ones I like... He sounds hot _~ anyways, update again soon!
NthNinth chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
another great chapter, update soon!
El Lobo chapter 12 . 6/24/2003
keep going with this. when are they gonna find out who she is?
Darke Angel chapter 11 . 6/24/2003
wow! this is one great story! i just read it, and i'm hooked! all the characters are so cool~ and so real! you're really good at writing. maybe you could make this story into a book? if you did, i'd certainly buy it!

write more, and update soon, please!
El Lobo chapter 2 . 6/23/2003
good so far
Death-Hunterx1 chapter 11 . 6/21/2003
*blinks looking back at the last few lines* I feel like a pervert, that got me thinking, :) Anyway, keep writing!
Intuition chapter 11 . 6/18/2003
This was a good chapter! Ok, so they don't know she's a girl... I actually like it better that they don't know yet, since it would make the story a whole lot more intresting... You should have the romance between whoever you think would best fit Jynx's personality. Frankly, I like all of the guys, although, if you paired Jynx and Aren up, you could have a love/hate relationship going because it doesn't seem that Jynx likes Aren all too much except subconciously... Nevermind, maybe I'm reading way too much into it. I do that sometimes. Anyways, Can't wait till you update!
Cassi chapter 10 . 6/16/2003
Eh, forgot to mention something in my review and had to go back a chapter in order to say it. Bleh. Anyway, I was going to say that there's nothing wrong with naming instruments! All three of mine have names (Dixie, Noodle, Shorty). I think that Kael's attitude towards his lute is very appropriate. :) Good job, as always.
Cassi chapter 11 . 6/16/2003
I personally think Rhys is too old for Jynx... but whatever. ;) Something about the 'we know you're secret' scene was a little off, though. Kind of like a lot of hype for something small, unless blending into a crowd is something significant and rare in this world and I'm not catching on. Makes me wonder, how are they going to handle the truth of her gender? Nice to see Rhys keeping his cool about her panic attack though, and dunking her head was a brilliant way of keeping her still. If anything, her little moment of spazzing should alert them that she does have a much bigger secret than that (blending well). Over all, very nice job, and I'm looking forward to chappie 12. Laterz.
rocket baby doll chapter 11 . 6/16/2003

u cant just leave me like that!


what an evil, evil way to end it...

write another chapter...


kris chapter 11 . 6/15/2003
I think you have a lot of talent. Your story is well written. I like to read about women doing things that have been considered un-womanly...I think you might have a tough time deciding which guy Jynx is going to like. In my opinion, I think it should be Rhys. Well I hope you update your story soon. I would like to read more. I keep hoping someone will discover her identity. Good luck on future chapters.

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