this is getting better with each chapter... what is she going to do to get out of this one? And she just made a fool of herself... poor Jynx

and hey, there's nothing wrong with naming instruments! *grins sheepishly* I named my clarinet(Isobel) and my saxophone(Ash). Sad but true. Oh, I also named a pencil - Mr Gnarled.

hells x

Dern! I thought Aren had found out! :(

...O' well, whatever happens will be perfect. I'm *really* likin' this and *I* think it's origanal. (?)

As for the romance thing, at first I was like "Of course she should be with Rhys." But now I'm really starting to like Aren...pluse I think it would be a little more "exotic" if it were him. (?)

But anyway, like I said, whatever you decide will be great.

Update soon please! ! !

Nice story.

I am a little confused though, what secret did they figure out if it wasn't the fact that she was a girl?

aw w. . .

I thought she was going to burst out laughing when she found out what they meant.

_ I cant wait to see how this turns out!

-Em

"The rest is silence"

Hurry up and update soon, please.

*mouth falls open* OMG, how the hell will she get outta that one? And another thing, exactly how long until they find out that 'he' is actually a 'She'? I need to know! Please please please update again soon! Please?

they cant find out yet! no, she can bathe with clothes on :)

Thanks for the dialogue, it did help! Does Aren know about Jynx...? I can't wait to see Rhys's reaction when he finds out Jynx was the little girl he found. I love the way you started to develop Aren's and Keal's characters. Can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon!

great story

hopefuly you'll write more!

kael did seem like he was on drugs

but aren was just mysterious

i so much l-o-v-es your story. i like all the characters. i rarely choose main characters as favs, but i love Jynx so much! please let her fall in love with Rhys! i know everyone will beat me with a stick cus that sounds so cliche, but i can't help myself Rhys sounds sexy...so does Aren and Kael... i'm so greedy.

yay! so much fun to read... does aren know? is he gonna tell rhys that jynx is a girl? argh - i need more son!

hells x

YAY AN UPDATE! lol she kicked him in the face _ wonder how they're gonna act wen they find out she's a she!...that's what Aren told Rhys isn't it? can't wait for the next chappie! update soon!

Maybe you're just going through a slump. Your writing quality diminishes, your ideas falter, and you wonder why on earth you even tried. Then you come back stronger than ever. I wouldn't worry too much about it, if I were you. Take a break, if you need to.

Nah, I don't think Kael and Aren came out like they were on drugs.. they seem fine to me. Keep writing!

I don't remember if I reviewed this one yet or not. _ Oh well, if I did, here's another one.

This is getting pretty cool; I like the pace you're taking this story with. The names are awesome too; I can't tell you how many times I've been turned away from something because the writer played an alternate universe with normal names. I really like Rhys so far, and I'm glad Jynx can't go back to the church. The people there bug me. _

On to chappie 10...

*runs around screaming* YAY AN UPDATE! this has brightened my day somewhat. I LOVE AREN! HES SO MYSTERIOUS AND COOL AND SUAVE AND I WANNA MARRY HIM AND I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HE TOLD RHYS AND I WANNA KNOW WHY HE HAS REASONS FOR ACTING LIKE HE DOES AND AND I LOVE THE FEMINIST THING AT THE END ON YEAH JYNX KICKS MAJOR SEXIST BOOTAY AND AND *is shot with tranquilizers by numerous shaven headed men* *twitches then lies still*