I'm BACK! Ha! think I'm gone eh? Never! muahahaaha! I see that this story is going well...*nods* so keep on writing friend!

The first thing that I have to say is don't degrade yourself so much. I want you to know that you are a great author. Your chapters are far from too short and even the ones that you think are bad actually turn out quite well. All of your characters are lively and so real. I like the way Rhys acts and Aren just seems to be a little antisocial so don't worry about him being too wierd or anything. Unless there's something completely different about him that you were trying to portray. I like Jynx too but she seems almost too calm all the time or too happy but I guess that's just supposed to be her nature. Also your plot is completely off the map and that's one of the things that make it so interesting. Please keep up the good work and I promise I'll review again!

aw!

you know, it's people like you that validate my reasons never to write a fanfiction. its so cute!

pls hurry up an upload!

(If you're still wondering about romantic pairings, jynx should be with rhys, but i think we all know that already)

Wow, that was positively fabulous! Beautiful writing, as always, and I loved the ending...*gasp* such a cliffie! Ah well I shan't complain about the clifhanger, I write them too and enjoy them quite a lot. However, the next chapter is out, which means that I shall be off to read it! *salutes*

OOh, lotsa action, me like! This is coming along very well. well, you have four other chapters for me to read, so I might as well read them...sorry for the short reviews. I usually do longer reviews, and I will for the 10th chapter, which is your most recent update. OH, thanks soo much for reviewing my story! ~Clare

Another awesome chapter! Don't put your writing skills down- this is one of my favorite FPN stories and I think that you're amazingly talented! Anyway, you must update soon. ) And I think that she should get together with Kael, he sounds friendly. Aren's kinda freaky. Rhys is awesome though, I love that name and my friend just pointed out to me that in a upcoming chapter of my story I used it. Mrphm. Well, he isn't like your Rhys, and I got the name off , so yeah. *gets all defensive* But he sounds cool too, and aww poor Colin! I hate nightmares. Alright I must depart, I'm using a library comp. at school, so ciao! Update son!

Alli

Hey! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, or maybe even the one before that...*blush* but I just wanted to keep going with it. It's realyy good! Agh, I totally love your writing and descriptions. I can't wait for the 'action' coming up. :) ~Clare

dont say that! your writting is good! I think you are probably just having a bad day. Your descriptions of everything are very good, including the ones of Aren, although he is a little Anime-ish

Speaking of Aren he seems rather smug, but im sure thats just a cover for something. Maybe he's physicic. . .

Keep on writting and dont give up on us becasue I wanna know what happens!

GR. . . . I hate sexist people. . .

-Em

im seriously gonna cry if she doesnt end up with rhys. im emotionally and mentally unstable, surviving on only caffiene to force myself through 5 assignments and the prospect of exams in 2 or 3 weeks (yikes!) great chapter, love the charachters.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER!

"oops" i accidentally kicked you in the face... hehehehe

i love your story :)

I think this story is cool. Definitely adding it to my fav's list. Anyways, update again soon, k?

i can't wait to find out what he told rys.. and best friends and the kick- excellent!

I thought Aren was really cool. I'm still unsure about the romance. Kael is definitely a no. I'd have to go with Aren before Rhys. Crimson eyes and mismatched eyes make a nice pair. He was also the first one to realize she was a girl. But Rhys was the one who saved her. But that would make him like an older brother... arg. Just update. Please, before I die of waiting.

Arg. Stupid brats, they got the better of her.