Please update! Have you seen how many reviews you have? 158! You must write more!

Please update! This story has inspired me to work on my own...(darn thing just won't leave...I've already written a lot...why doesn't it go away?) Seriously, this is a fantastic story. You have just the right balance of description and action. I like how you describe the settings so that it feels like you're actually there. You have enormous talent. Also, a side story for Kael and Bailey sounds totally sugoi! I love it when authors do that. It really seems to say that they take time with their stories and how they present it. Please write more! This is a fantastic story and should be continued. You have talent that not many people are blessed with. Please share some more of your genius with us. Thank you!

WRITE MORE! I love this! It is fantastic! My favorite fantasy stories are ones that have thieves in them, and this one is all about thieves! *grins happily to self* Please write more! I like Aren-he's cool. Enigmatic... multi-faceted...with a past shrouded in smoke and fog...dude, I'm okay. Anyways, please write more! This is great!

Please write more! Great story!

wow- great story! i wonder what the deal with Aren is. And I wonder when they'll finally notice that Jynx is a GIRL- if Rhys didn't already notice. _ It seems like they have the notion that she's someone different, so they treat her differently... but they don't have a clue. haha. what I'm saying doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

Anyway* i'm sticking out for those great Rhys and Jynx moments. Whenever they happen to appear- _~

I love this story, my favorite character was Aren. Dont know why. I think you have something here keep it up.

write on...

MANNIE

Was Neko their former leader? That would explain why Rhys is so touchy about both subjects... Okay, this is like the third time I've read this. You have to update, we're all waiting... Aren is REALLY cool, by the way...

Yeah,Aren is COOL. I really hope you don't put this on hiatus... this is a really fun story...

lol yeah the whole time i was thinking...HIV! lol, but oh, well! Anyways my favorite character would have to be Jynx! Luv her! (a.k.a. leon _!) Fav pairings...hm.

Aren/Jynx (cause it just seems so dangerous!) Rhys/Jynx (cause it seems really cute! either one would be great!)

Anyways you have to update soon! PLZ! I love your story! UPDATE!

updates son

this fic is da bomb

I understand completely about the hiatus thing. I have this one massive thing that I refer to as My Baby that I've worked on, on and off, for years now. Sometimes you just have to take a (rather long) break. I hope you get the inspiration to continue this one if you put it on hold, and good luck with your other ventures. Exploring other avenues will help this work if/when (hopefully when) you return to it. No matter what you do, I hope you keep writing. You got the talent. :)

On the chapter... very interesting. Nicely done. I like how Jynx was reluctant to completely join, and you portray that well. Rhys is all mysteriously cool, as always. The other characters are very lifelike and have their own stories and enigmas that give you plenty of material to work with. Aren's fast becoming one of my, if not my, favorite character. I do hope that you let us in on him and his secrets a little more before ending this thing. :)

Laterz.

...creepy

so good i love it!

~MEl

GAH! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

Do it again! Do it again!...sorry

Yes, wonderful chapter! You have no idea how happy I was when i saw that you had finally updated!

PLEASE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! *runs around in circles*

Hehe. First time reading you're story, but I have to say, I'm very impressed. You think you're material through very well, you dialouge is natural, and you're description is good. Please, Keep this up!