yes! another chapter! this is great, just as wonderful as all the rest. *grins* know what? i think the best pairing is aren/jynx, and i think i've said it before - but this chap confirms it. the way aren was acting toward jynx... *squeals in delight*

please, please, please write more and update soon!

Well I like it. I love Aren's character. My favorite pair, her and aren, he's tight. Write more!

~Mel

this storys cool I wonder when it'll come out that she's a girl and the baby from the beginning? I like this story I'll keep reading :)

THATS HOW PEOPLE GET AIDS YOU FILTHLY CHILDREN! jk!

NE-way cool chappie. . . I dunno I think at first my favorite couple was Rhys-Jynx but I dont knwo anymore. . . I think now I like Aren-Rhys better!

if you stop the story for a whilke ill understand - as long as you come back to us!

-Em

Hello. Alrighty then:

Fav. Character: Aren.

Curiosity killed the cat.

Pairings: ? Too early. But more Chickie and Aren then other, but something tells me that won't be happening any time soon.

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Personally, If I were as freaked out as she sounded, I would have taken my chances running, and had to be dragged back kicking and screaming. Or dead, knowing my luck I would have found the only cliff in the jungle.

Side stories are fun, but I'd finish your main one first then have the side story up as a 'sequal' dealie.

That's it. Update soon.

Im reviewing to let you know that I've been reading your story and in hopes that you'll still continue to update reguarly. I was also wondering if you would e-mail the name of your other stories; I would love to read them.

P.S. I THINK I like Rhys best but that could change as the story goes

Bailey is my favorite character. Because I know nothing about him but he sounds like this boy I like ... aosnfid

HAH! You *have* to write Jynx/Aren now!...Well. At least according to the laws of Brenna-ism.. Anywho, I shall be awaiting your next chapter. Um, yeah, so bye.

P.S. Good chapter. Please let them find out soon-er. Who knows? You might figure out where your goin'. (with this)

yay! finally another fantabulous chapter! thank you so much - it was great. And aren/jynxness is looking more plausable with every paragraph...

im really looking forward to the next chapter, i hope its soon! oh, and if you do write a fic on kael & bailey's past, i'd definitely read it...

hells x

Don't discourage yourself! I liked this chapter and an initiation seems just right! What other stories have you written? Update soon!

I like it. It's great. Is Jynx going to have a romance w/Aren, once they figure out what she is, of course. It seems logical, at least to me. But my mind works in really weird ways. Keep writting.

omg! i love u so much! thank u so much for finally reviewing! i like the Aren/jynx chemestry... its cute... come on, and dont leave me like that again!

Oh, come on... I was sure that Rhys would find out he had met Jynx before when he asked for her name. Ah, well. Maybe another time, then. As for the knife thing... I am very squeamish when it comes to blood and cuts and all that that if I were in Jynx's position, if would have tried to run anyway.

Hmm.. I wonder why Aren is so interested in Jynx... Oh well, I'll hopefully find out next time you update, right? ;) So update soon.

my favourite charachters are Rhys and Jynx! im a shipper for them all the way!

'leon and eagle! hehe. The initiation is sorta similar to the riders initiation in The Blue Sword. Good book. Its not so close that it seems copied tho, great job!