Reviews for A Deeper Love
NiteDreamer chapter 12 . 5/24/2003
man...i havnet read this in such a long time! :p hehe..glad you finallyupdated tho..in love with the story too even if similar story line..o wellz..its still koo .
Ellen Enchanted chapter 12 . 5/24/2003
Cliffhanger... this is antagonizing, eventhough I know what's coming next in the story. Good job re-writing the story... Jordan has even more depth now, and it shows the story in a whole new light.
SilverTear3 chapter 12 . 5/24/2003
hey-

Those chapters were really good...even though i know the story line (I read wanting something more)I am still dying to know what happens, and what Jordan thinks/says...it's so cool to read it from his point of view...oh and by the way...I am really sorry about your grandfather...I know how hard it is...
Kodiak Bear chapter 12 . 5/24/2003
Oh... the class rings. I remember this part! Yay! Good job, and please update soon!
Kodiak Bear chapter 11 . 5/24/2003
Good chappie. I'm sorry about your great grandfather. I really like, on to read the next chapter!
Kristin chapter 12 . 5/24/2003
WOW! I can't wait til the next chapter. I know you're going through a lot...but PLEASE try to update soon because I dunno how long I can wait! Great chapter...SO cute! I LOVE it!

~*Kristin*~
Kristin chapter 11 . 5/24/2003
Hey!

It's me...YOUR BIGGEST FAN! Well...I'm really sorry about your great grandfather. I hope you feel better because I know what it's like to deal with death. My grandpa died when I was 12 and my best friend died last year. (Just like Lydia) Just always know that people will be there to support you. Keep writing...and I understand if you don't update soon because of everything you are goign through. Just always remember you are a great writer and people (like me) LOVE your story!

~*Kristin*~
brittney chapter 11 . 5/24/2003
i feel so bad..i'm sry for your loss. take your sweet precious time updating. Also, your doin a great job, so no need to be so hard on yourself.

i'm outie, good luck
SilverTear3 chapter 10 . 5/17/2003
WOW!This is so good I started reading it after I finished "Wanting Something More". It's really neat to read it from Jordan's point of view, this is an amazing story and you have incredible talent. I hate to nag but HURRY AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!I am hanging in suspence here, I mean, I know what is going to happen, it's just so interesting to hear it from Jordan's point of view. I am feeling slightly inferior at the moment, because I have been writing a story (it's not on fiction press yet) and it's not half as good as this! OKay, I am going to stop rambling now...I can't wait to read the next chapter!

~Kelli
Howdy-Doody chapter 10 . 5/8/2003
You're mad at me, aren't you? I apologize and realize that if you don't want to e-mail me anymore, I'll understand. And to anyone else reading this, no, I'm not bi. It's a personal thing.
gauche chapter 10 . 5/8/2003
i think i like this one better than "wanting something more".

it's really good.
Laurie-the-Duck chapter 10 . 5/6/2003
mussiness, even if i know what happens, i still love it!
Kristin chapter 10 . 4/30/2003
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M GONNA DIE IF I CAN'T READ MORE! I'M SERIOUS! IM me sometime! MY s/n is LuViNaLiTTLeDoRk! TTYL!

~*Kristin*~

:oD
chinoz chapter 10 . 4/17/2003
Gods, it's really easy to get us to review if u wld just update. I was abt to go bananas because I kept checking almost everyday.

Yeah I was pretty surprised with so much new stuff & well, more christianity stuff. Is this story more for Christians only?

Or rather, does this reflect the fact that Jordan is more involved with church & God than Lydia? I mean, I know she wasn't with any church but her conversation/time with God is almost non-existant & Jordan spend time with God thru his church rite?

Anyway, I really love your stories so please update all right? I'm looking forward to Distance as well. )
Summer1 chapter 10 . 4/17/2003
Hmm...I read WSM. :) This is better. More specifics with new scenes. :) Hehe. Whatever. They're both nice. A bit too mushy...but nice. :)
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