Reviews for A Deeper Love
chinoz chapter 3 . 3/25/2003
Hi Bri,

shoots it's me again. think u are going to hate me a lot. anyway, the 3rd chpt abt jordan calling elaine... ermm... if jordan's dad has taken the phone, shouldn't jordan be getting the phone frm his dad? if the internet line allows him to call out, then shouldn't it be more logical to call Lydia using the other phone?

chinoz...
chinoz chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
Hi Bri,

thanks for clearing up some of my questions regarding Lydia's relationship with her mother. But... sorry, I have more questions now. If her mummy doesn't really care abt her... why was there a custody battle in the 1st place?

Another thing, Jordan's P.O.V abt Lydia's eating disorder seems to be inconsistent with WSM. Because in WSM, before her health class, I thought Jordan & Lydia had already worked her eating disorder though? But this chpt shows that Jordan didn't really manage to work her eating disorder thru' with her.

So, does it mean that she was still a victim of eating disorder even though she doesn't display any sign of it? I mean, she certainly has the mentality.

Great chpt. Cleared up some questions I had regarding WSM. ;-)
KRiSTiNo71216 chapter 3 . 3/25/2003
GREAT! As always though! Keep writing...I wanna read more...and its cool to be able to see the conversations Jordan has with his dad...and whats going on when hes not with Lydia!

~*Kristin*~

:o)
LazyDaze06 chapter 3 . 3/24/2003
i like this story. we're remebering wsm while reading the sequel. i like jordan's pov, but lydia's still my fav char. n e ways, glad u finally posted this & can't wait 4 the next chap.
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