Reviews for Father with the Lilies
the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
Hurrah for chartreuse skies! _

This poem reminded me of Sylvia Plath, for some reason. Lovely, wonderfully written; it flowed very nicely. Fantastic images, the chair and the lilies and the restaurant at the end (the part about the greasy handprints struck me as very beautiful).

Keep writing! Peace ~~
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
Jesus this is gorgeous! But powerful, like an slap in the face that you expect but don't expect to be that harsh.
FalseExecutioner chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
(speechless) It was the best story i have seen out of u yet (its is not a lie and yes i did read it) It is perfect. I dont know what to say
Impressionist chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
absolutely beautiful. painful...raw...and I can relate. well done.
account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
I can identify. It makes me sad, but that's a good thing, I love poetry that can affect me. Very sad and pretty. I like it very very much [but when do i not?]
Amaris chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
I don't know what to say...and I wish I knew... I know you'll miss him... And although I know I'm probably not all that good at giving advice, and probably will never be able to say the right thing, I'll always be here to listen to whatever you have to say, and I'll be here to do whatever I possibly can, whenever you want.