Reviews for Take Me Free
sye chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
good and ...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
That was really great! I agree with the others when they say that this has a great flow to it.

~Heart of the Sword
SecretSweetness chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Good, very good... that sounds a lot like something I would write too ) I love your poetry, keep it up
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
M, pretty good. I like it. Good topic... :) Some spelling thingeys... but hey! :)

Keep writing,

Vnomi. ;)
LittleMaggie chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Oh, that was beautiful. I read it 3 times. It's got the most gorgeous flow to it.
Kingdoms chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
i'll add you to my fav list for this one.
Lounalune chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
It's so sad and beautiful, I really don't know what else I can say. Amazing.
Lioness Black chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
Very dramatic.
e. riley chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
Sad and very well written. "Take Me Free" is a great title. I likes it, precious.

Hey, you reviewed my story "My Dearest Rachel." The third chapter's up if you want to see it. It might be pathetic. :)

always, me
May chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
The poem is good but there are some grammar errors. Maybe you should write more. :)
Nonki chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
" She's searching for a man

And all she can find is only a can "

I like this phrase...dunno why coz I just found myself mentally reciting it over and over again...haha.

err...A little suggestion though (dun mind?).

perhaps it would sound better if you put

'There she is, crying'

instead of

'There is she, crying'...

Anyway, just keep writing! _