First of all, this is very well written, way above the norm. I only say that as it stood out all the way through. Although I am from the states, and had a little trouble with the school system, I think I compared it fairly to ours. However, no matter where you live, the meaning behind this doesn’t change. The facts don’t change. Also, I liked the fact that she ‘didn’t’ have a name. That way, besides having a brother Ty, it can relate to anyone. One can put themselves in these situations and feel both empathy and sympathy. You are gaining ground with every piece you write, and I look forward to reading much more of your works in the future.

Wow. Very sad. I felt really bad for your character.

It would be nice if she had a name, but that is my only suggestion. Wonderfully done.

The Mageling :)