A very touching poem. Nice work.

-Seras

I do think that is one of your bests. A few errors:

5th line: You alayws held..."awlays"

12th line: begged and pleadd for..."pleaded"

~I'm sure you didn't mean to.

Yet another wonderful poem! Okay, this one's going on favourites...geez, you're too good! I'm jealous! *waves* See ya!

Hmm, this is brilliant. Normally, I'd go through and nitpick, but this seems like a tad bit too personal poem to do that for. Actually feel as though you've gotten to known the writer a bit through it, which is hard to do in a poem. Bravo, I say, bravo. :o)

-Adam

Wow... ... ehm... yeah...

Truly a beautiful poem. I have goosebumps now. Its so powerful and personal. I envy your talent. Keep writing. I hope that it works.