Reviews for The Pursuit of Death
RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I really liked this, it was almost symbolic.

You describe it as the pursuit of death. It could also be the pursuit of someone you loved, yes? Get what I'm saying?

Hmm. I liked the word choice, although I feel that you could have substituted certain words with other, more...colorful ones. Like laughed, smiled... Maybe replaced them with more complex ones.

I like the idea, though. It sesms intriguing. Good work.

-RM love, link on my page.
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
This is amazing. Simple sentences never moved me so much.
Pose For Me chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
I hate death. Oddly enough, I read the poem. Wowzers.
Regina O.B.
The Anti-Social Remix chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
powerful. exciting. i like it - on my fav list.
saiya-jinmira chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
Cool very cool... I like your more suttle poems...They're good because you can get so detailed and paint a picture in someone's mind ,yet sometimes less is more...
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
Such persistent pursuer!
Dark Gryphon chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
A VERY WELL Written Poem. Almost like a Nightmare how he/she worded it.
shatteredporcelain chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
wow. beauty in simplicity...
ELR07 chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
so cool! I love it! If you want you can check out mine.