Hilarious poem, I love it. The rythm is quite like Dr. Seuss, which is much fun. Brilliant idea for a poem. :)
~ Hencellina

nice poem, my elf wannabe friend! I started laughing when i read it, and my parents looked at me like i was crazy. am i? good poem! i like the rhythm of it and how it rhymes. and by the way, a tomato is FRUIT, not a veggie

this is cute. i can't get too nitpicky, really. the stanza's are placed nicely for a silly poem such as this, and it flows about the way you would expect. good job