Reviews for A Path of Tears
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
wow, that was really good! It had such description and it really moved me! keep writing these!
Soul of Frodo chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
O.O It's rhymed, it's metered, and it has actual coherent content! *falls over in shock*Incredible! My only decent rhyming poetry is either sappy songs or nonsense! *worships*
Windsong chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Wow! This poem is so...inspiring! As usual, I have such a blast reading your writing style, it's so beautiful, and you have a real gift for writing -. And now I feel so optimistic and cheerful! Keep writing, please! -Windy-chan
Ahrihliir chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
This is fantastic. It really gives you cause to think about our journey in life, and for me it really summarizes Christianity. I have goosebumps. I don't know if you were going for rhythym or not, but I think you could work on the flow a little.
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/30/2003
Awesome job!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
Great job!

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