I cant believe i found my way back to this story again . This was one one the first. Things i read and i dont think i can pass through such sadness again . Its a wonderfull story but too sad for me

Only one word to describe this: wow.

Amazing story :O. You're a great a writer, in terms of most stuff that I a learner still fail to do. I like the story overal and it's sad there aren't that many good fan fics on this topic. I'm going to take a shot at it and write my own version, once I get enough experience that is :/.
Keep up with the good work and it's good for a person to come back to this site after like 8 years or so...

AWESOME 9 OUT OF TEN!

what a touching story, ive not read similar for a long time, keep it up and you never know!

A beautiful story. So heartfelt and straight from the heart. It made me cry *bursts into tears and starts sobbing* I applaud you

Hey. The story is pretty cool, but there's one thing I don't get... You treat like the rest of humanity, except for two people understand how Tobieaz is feeling. I understand that it would make it more complicated, but the fact that the police... etc keep saying the same thing is crazy. I'm pretty sure people are smarter than that. And the parents of Tobieaz have got to be the most stupid people on the planet. It takes a lot to be a crappy parent, but you have to have some sort of mental disease to be that insensitive. And the whole "Oh my god! That boy's got wings on his back! Kids! Cover yourself! You souls will be stolen by that devil!" That's WAY too much out of proportion. I can't think of a single kind of person who would say that.

This probably sounds more like a rant or a flaming than a review, and I apologize for that. It's just that I can't seem to relate with this story and albeit, this is reality with a twist, but even the normal people - well you just can't relate with anyone. I know you've completed this story so it doesn't really matter what I say as much, but I just thought I'd put my thoughts out there.

~Az

O.O omigosh! im sorry, but how could you! you made him die! *sniff* this is soo sad, but it also is realistic. but still, poor tobi, he died. *cries*

beautiful. i can't wait to see what happens when he returns.

aw

whew! that's good...he was saved by druni.

omigosh! that's so harsh! they can't sever his leg tendons! now he has to escape all over again!

hm...so he finally left that bad city. so where is he now? is it an island?

whoa! totally awesome! keep it up!

oh man. that's horrible. why can't they just leave him alone? even better, he should go find himself an island in the middle of an ocean or something, and live there.

whoo! good thing rohehe was around. she smacked some sense into Tobi. finally!