interesting. rather vague though. and my name's melissa! lol.. yea. good writing. definately should seperate a whole chunk of text into paragraphs. like chapter 3. keep it up. )

wowie...itz short, but good so farz...i like it, please update!

Interesting are you going to put more. please do! Check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!