Reviews for Christmas Eve
Ishuzu chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Yep, you warned us, and it was depressing! I really liked the imagry and it's hard to make Christmas Eve depressing so kuidos! Nice work.

Thanks for adding me to your fave author's list I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Fortissamo chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
My, that's quite depressing for a Christmas poem...

M... but it does make me think.

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~Strikes Again!~
Forgottenlife1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
Has more of a storyline jingle to it...

It would very easily be translated into fiction although I think that you should leave it as it is...I myself don't personally consider it your best work...but it WAS very meaningful however...

Of wolves and humans,

arty chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
it was really sad

how do u get these vivid images?

good very good
Kathryn Schaus chapter 1 . 4/2/2003

This is so depressing! Good yet so depressing. I thought Christmas was suppost to be joyful? lol
MadMorrow chapter 1 . 3/30/2003
When people ignore the suffering of others, when there is not enough love for strangers, when the plight of a man who has nothing is seen as a nuisance or nothing at all...this a world to be pitied.

I enjoyed your poem, it reflects a sort of bitter truth about people. Kinda reminded me of that short story "The Little Match Girl."