Reviews for Longing
Sariah H chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
really good, simple but to the point, if thats really how you feel then i must say that I can relate, *sigh* don't u hate life sometime toodles
forbiddenfantasy chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
longing *sigh* its beautiful and painful...such emptiness, and need for that someone special ne, and the irony, that u never know who it might be...that feeling of perfection... damn... this was sweet n simple.
snowtiger13731 chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
sounds like meeh. especially the lines "i long to be the best/hoping that work/will take the place of need."

good job. i can relate.

Chiaroscuro chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
That's...depressing. ; Still, life is not all work, and all work has never been much of a life. Often you'll find yourself critiquing your performance with the standards of others - when the only person you need to please is yourself. Of course, in my case, this usually results in a massive amount of work. ;