Reviews for Soul
kayttea chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
woa. very freaky. you're good at writing this kinda stuff. if this was a movie i would so be staying up all night. i'm not that great with scary movies. but anyway! very creative. great story
Infamous Writer chapter 2 . 8/2/2004
Interesting plot. The characters were enjoyable, but more detailed descriptions could be present. Also, I wanted chapter 2 to be longer... :P Well, very good work. The setting of the story is definitely eerie, which is great.
furry creature chapter 2 . 5/30/2003
kl. its a nice story, all though it has a certain ring of a mary sue in it. in parts the dialouge seemed a lttle wooden, and you didn't have to repeat the frist cgapter in the second.

other than that,

keep it up, and keep trying!
chickamoomoo chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
Oh, thats sad... I think Darryl needs a good kick up the-

anywho... good work!

Nicole _