Reviews for I Dare You |
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steph chapter 4 . 9/1/2004 AHH. It's been over a year.. are you ever going to update? That teaser is most definitely teasing me. gosh. I want to know what's going to happen next. pleasepleaseplease update ) |
xiaobudian chapter 4 . 8/13/2004 ooh! Wonder wat Ray's gonna get him 2 do next... Hope there won't b too much heartbreak. |
Isla Sangue chapter 4 . 7/25/2004 Oh, you have got to update soon! Undergarments? Ha! Luv Dittany x |
becca chapter 4 . 7/2/2004 oh, now that is just GOOD! hehehehhe |
stellarr chapter 4 . 6/26/2004 im realy loving your story so far!...can't wait for the next chapter..The dares finally start! D update soon! ..stellarr.. |
Coffee Shopper chapter 4 . 6/11/2004 It's great so far. I think it has a bit of a slow start. The dares aren't here yet so it doesn't make it so funny and interesting... yet. I'm looking forward to the innuedos (sp?). Lord knows, they're hilarious. I swear, you could cut the sexual tension between the two of them with a knife. Or maybe that's because I read the teasers, which definitely implies that. Oh, one thing that you should be sure not to go overboard with is the drama. Raythe is definitely a drama queen from what I can tell, but make sure she doesn't go overboard with it. I mean, she likes to yell so much, I'm not sure it's very realistic. Great start. I can't wait to read chapter 5... which I hope will be very soon. -Ivy |
Crimsonoaks chapter 4 . 5/31/2004 this is so fun to read. I'm looking forward to the challenges, and the relationships. ;) I would like a few more good qualities about Raythe though. She still seems a little stuck-up. This chapter she wasn't so much like that but still. I hope updates come soon, i'll be sure to R&R. Keep writing my writting friend! |
hummer chapter 4 . 5/8/2004 cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait! Heh. I'm a bit hyperactive right now.. mwahahahhahaha beware! XD Can't wait until the next chappie! Love you and yo story lots! |
ME chapter 4 . 4/28/2004 Please consider continuing this story. I am looking forward to reading another chapter. It has been awhile! :) |
KTstarShot chapter 4 . 4/19/2004 Hey you! Yeah, you-the authoress who hasn't updated in almost a year! *kicks you* xD Update, damnit. I like your fic; it's original and different. x) And I want to see how you're going with it. In any case, there are a couple grammatical errors here and there, but nothing to blow the reader away by distraction. _ Welps, hope you finish the fic, eh? |
tstj chapter 4 . 4/12/2004 I LIKE IT! Please continue to update! It's very relaxing to read and your writing is great! XD *puts it on my fav list* |
Nephrite chapter 4 . 4/2/2004 Alright. bring it on. sounds cool. i like it |
Lady Star chapter 1 . 3/24/2004 Is the school's name borrowed from 'When Sunlight Meets Moonlight' on ? If so, does Jo know that you're using it? |
youdon'tknowme91 chapter 4 . 3/24/2004 oh god, this is majorly cool! i just saw your last update date and that was JULY LAST YEAR! PLEASE UPDATE! P I LOVE THIS STORY! |
youdon'tknowme91 chapter 2 . 3/22/2004 cool chapter. It's kinda a spooky game,though P okay, I'm off to the next chapter! D |