I like this story very much. It seems like it could be an outline for a longer story, but it's also very great as a short story. With what you had to work with (the short length), I think you explained the girls' histories and futures perfectly!

wow! i luved it!

Lord richard should die! (not the one Pearl is married to, just the murderer.)
This story is cool, except for the fact that the murderer gets away!

oh that's horrible! but Violet is very nice to do that for her sister... i think... LOL I loved how you put you should never trust beautiful girls. LMAO! At least Violet and The D guy are together... to where ever they go! LOL good job though. I liked it.

later

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My sister and I are a mix of Violet and Pearl. I like it. It's so sad, though.

*sighs happily* I wish I had that close a bond with my sister... *looks around* Don't let her here me say that...

*blinkblink* Anyway. That was so beautiful. Touching, really. . I loved it.