Reviews for Failure
BC1337 chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
You captured that all too familiar feeling of despair. We writers know it well, but to capture it in it's complex seeming is very defficult. I hope that made sense, it did to me. Good job

-Brad
Unfinished Author chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Good use of ryhme. Very emotional, sounds like it came from the heart.
suicidel angel chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
interesting, i love the line "Pain is no longer pain but numbness" may i borrow it? i'll give you full credit, i just wanna attatch it to my fav quotes
Mackenzie Anderson chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
Sometimes it seems as if we've failed when we're really just starting to win the battle... just a thought. Well done.
RNL chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
Pretty amazing stuff! This is so cool. I like your style, you have talent. I know this kinda feeling. Harsh but true!