Reviews for Sun and Moon
topaz07 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Amazing. You are talented. Blessed Be.
firess chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
wow. i like that. i too am wiccan and this is generally the idea of all other wiccans i have met.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Beautiful poem. You capture the essence of the sun and moon brilliantly. I loved the last four lines. Keep writing :)

Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Repitition works.
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Very nice. The moon always seems more like a lady to me too. The man in the moon, HA!


obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
great poem! nice imagery and personification! good job on this. keep on writing! btw, thanks for the review. yea, it was a star.