|Reviews for Beauty|
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 6 . 8/1/2014
This was so cute, really well done! XD
However, I thought the mother's reaction was a little bland, not a reaction you would expect from a mother who raised her child as a single parent for six years after the death of her husband...
Personally, I would've beat the hell out of the guy myself if Conner was my child! :P
Other than that, I really think you nailed the psyche of the characters, and did great on portraying their conflicting emotions and restraints at times! I really loved how you introduced the readers to Conner's abuse, not by simple stating it, but instead arranging it to be realized after a series of events!
That I thought was masterfully done! ;7
Thanks for the great read,
| Maya LeFay chapter 6 . 12/24/2013
this story is so simple, short and sweet. I love how Connor slowly, but surely warms up to Troy and allows himself to fall in love again. And Troy oh gosh poor bb has to deal with FEELINGS. oh no. The story ends perfectly, on a lovely note. I just really, really like this because it's not overly angsty and the main characters feel real. Kudos to you.
| vipera.422 chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
I enjoyed the story but I can’t understand how Connor could have forgiven Troy that easily. First, the jerk had cheated on him and then he’d said such awful things to him – not to mention he’d thrown him into an armchair even knowing his step-father had abused him – and Connor just forgave him as if nothing had happened! He should have made Troy grovel... at least a bit. Does he have no pride?
| Gracie chapter 6 . 5/13/2012
Oh... wow. That was tres beautiful, emotional, and hot. I could legitimately feel my heart breaking for Connor at some points. I couldn't seem to find any grammar/spelling mistakes which I greatly appreciate. It was realistic and cute. Dark in all the right places, and deliciously sexy at all the right times. I feel like I just spent the night reading a published award winning book. You always kept just enough detail to keep me entranced but content with the ending. I am completely in love with your writing. Thank you so much for graciously giving the world this perfect piece of art. Even after what... 9 years? This story will never get old and will forever be one of my top favorite stories, published or not. I feel extremely happy that I'm the 100th review because it makes me feel proud to have indulged myself in this piece of fiction. I can relate to how Connor felt about Troy at first and the gradual increase that wasn't to fast nor to slow. And Troy was just wonderful! Although he has flaws, they're humanly and agreeable. If, no- When you become a world renowned writer, please remember us faithful fictionpress fans! Thanks again,
| alwayzonsomethingluv chapter 6 . 5/8/2012
lol...I read this in that other...site...and it was LOVE!
okay that sounded wrong...well any way I live this story sooooooooo much!
So when I was going around reading random stories i stumbled over ur name and I was like...No! It can't be! but it was!
and so now I have read this story...again!
| sick at heart chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
This story is awesome :)
| S. Rune chapter 6 . 12/23/2011
This is a wicked story, can not help but keep coming back to re-read it.
| Fumiki chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
So sweet, I like this! I might gonna kill Troy if he's really leave Connor, just because that stupid insecurity of him, though XD
| msdarque chapter 6 . 4/6/2011
I really enjoyed reading it. Fun, interesting, bit dark... totally fantastic! :D
Congrats and many kudos!
| Dechtere chapter 6 . 2/13/2011
| Ben Tramsami chapter 6 . 12/6/2010
I don't recall if I reviewed this or not, but I thought I should tell you how amazing this story is. I was looking through my favorites and found this. So I read it and was reminded how good it was. Just thought I'd let you know. :)
| ella chapter 6 . 8/7/2010
I don't know if i reviewed before or not but anyway i love your story and i'm kind of sad that you don't update anymore but i love your stories , especially this one thank you for the great time i spent reading this
| Jaded Devil chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
I think this is one of my favourite stories that I've ever read on FictionPress! I love your characterizations. )
| drunkoffwooder chapter 6 . 4/15/2010
| pfannkucken chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
it's soo adorable!