Reviews for Beauty
Jaded Devil chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
I think this is one of my favourite stories that I've ever read on FictionPress! I love your characterizations. )
drunkoffwooder chapter 6 . 4/15/2010
beautiful ]
pfannkucken chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
it's soo adorable!
GEN chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
I just finished reading the whole story and I completely love it! Really hot and sweet with a dash of angst! It was just perfect! Keep writing, you're really great!
LaDyCr0sS chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
lovely story! n_n though i wish the period when troy was confused and tried to leave connor was a bit longer(produces more feelings of angst! mwuahahaha!)...couldn't stop reading through to the end though...

the description was very nice, from the characters and their feelings, to the thing bothered me though,it was the interchange of the words "boy" and "man" in reference to connor..._'kinda confused my imagination (drawing him in my mind as a little bit mature-physically- when the term 'man' is used, and then he transforms into a younger looking character for the term 'boy').

great job nontheless! insta fav!
luzifer chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
oh my god. i loved this story so much. it's been so long since i read something this good. i loved both their personalities. the ending was so heartwarming without bing mushy.
Nekko Rikku chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
That is a very, very interesting start. I like it!
Aime Atem chapter 6 . 3/22/2009
Fun! I love it! Great scenes.
Subbie chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
Aww... So sweet. I liked the last chapter, it's probably my favorite. And I also liked how you worked his stepfatehr into the story!

In chapter 4 when he was going to leave him I was like, NO! DAMNNIT! but then he came back, thank god...

sshsilence chapter 6 . 9/22/2008
this was the best, most cute thing EVER - Awesome -I completely love it. It was short, sweet and fabulous !
lady-me chapter 6 . 7/23/2008
oh! so sweet and loveley

Connor is just so cute~
i-see-faeries chapter 6 . 6/18/2008
Aw, that was just awesome. The middle? end? of the third chapter nearly made me cry. I didn't like it though. I love happy endings, but the way that came around just kind of disappointed me. Pretty cliche. But other than that, I love this. Cute. :D
Bedlam Chaos chapter 6 . 6/5/2008
One word and one word only ;) : CUTE
Tammsy chapter 6 . 5/13/2008
aw! CUTE! I love your characters!

Your story was soo good!
PindrakeCake chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
aw. that story was gorgeous.
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