Reviews for Beauty
LaDyCr0sS chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
lovely story! n_n though i wish the period when troy was confused and tried to leave connor was a bit longer(produces more feelings of angst! mwuahahaha!)...couldn't stop reading through to the end though...

the description was very nice, from the characters and their feelings, to the surroundings...one thing bothered me though,it was the interchange of the words "boy" and "man" in reference to connor..._'kinda confused my imagination (drawing him in my mind as a little bit mature-physically- when the term 'man' is used, and then he transforms into a younger looking character for the term 'boy').

great job nontheless! insta fav!
luzifer chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
oh my god. i loved this story so much. it's been so long since i read something this good. i loved both their personalities. the ending was so heartwarming without bing mushy.
Nekko Rikku chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
That is a very, very interesting start. I like it!
Aime Atem chapter 6 . 3/22/2009
Fun! I love it! Great scenes.
Subbie chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
Aww... So sweet. I liked the last chapter, it's probably my favorite. And I also liked how you worked his stepfatehr into the story!

In chapter 4 when he was going to leave him I was like, NO! DAMNNIT! but then he came back, thank god...

LEe
sshsilence chapter 6 . 9/22/2008
this was the best, most cute thing EVER - Awesome -I completely love it. It was short, sweet and fabulous !
lady-me chapter 6 . 7/23/2008
oh! so sweet and loveley

Connor is just so cute
i-see-faeries chapter 6 . 6/18/2008
Aw, that was just awesome. The middle? end? of the third chapter nearly made me cry. I didn't like it though. I love happy endings, but the way that came around just kind of disappointed me. Pretty cliche. But other than that, I love this. Cute. :D
Bedlam Chaos chapter 6 . 6/5/2008
One word and one word only ;) : CUTE
Tammsy chapter 6 . 5/13/2008
aw! CUTE! I love your characters!

Your story was soo good!
PindrakeCake chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
aw. that story was gorgeous.
Kisses For The Dead chapter 5 . 4/19/2008
I was crying so hard in this chapter!

I had scrolled ahead for a bit (I do that sometimes, it's a bad habit) and read some of the sad part and cried a little bit.

Then I went back and read the whole thing and cried even harder!

My dad already thought I was crazy and now my mom does too.

Gee, thanks.
sdfdsf chapter 5 . 1/8/2008
God.

You had me balling my eyes out in this chapter.
nomy chapter 6 . 12/24/2007
when i read this..i thought it will be different like totally different plot..and you just wrote an amazing and beautiful story..and its like just the right length for me to enjoy..and i love the most is when writer writes story that focusing on the main characters..and what they are feeling..because i hate to read other people pov because it can make me confused and bored..and you done a great job and i love this story! totally adore it!
Fork-In-Your-Eye chapter 6 . 12/13/2007
Your story is awesome. I can't help but love it over and over again till my time is up. Okay, so its exaggerated but i can't describe. The love between them made me cry the previous chapter. Aww...Literately! I'm so emotional. Thank you so much for the story.
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