Reviews for Family Values
staying-anon chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
mmhmm this was really good, you should definetly write more like this
stone chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
this story is good so far.i would like for you to continue.
Pogona chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Wow O_o

When I typed "pedophilia" into search just to see if anything came up...and it did.

I have to say...not bad, not bad at all. For some constructive criticism...you could have gone into a little more depth, made it more angsty. If you ever do another chap to this...I am so there!
Demonic Sublime chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
Fantastic...please continue the story!
Cat chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
Damnit, Danielle! T.T;; that's really naughty. .;; nice though...quite nice. Slash, inscest, and pedophilia...wow, we're really sick, aren't we? . Love you, and GREAT story!
ValaneyValaun chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
Good hook; it really draws the reader in. Regardless of whatever people may say about the subject matter, it was quite well-written. Good description, and solid mood.

One small thing that got me was the- how shall we say? -pubescence of the ten-year-old. I think that sexual maturity at that age is pretty rare, but... [shrugs]

Thanks!
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