They are such a funny couple :)

Haha. Arden is so easy to love, I love your writing.

First thing first- you really need to edit you writing more closely. most of them are just simple mistakes that you can totally fix, and they will make your stories so much more better and easier to follow; trust me, i have the same issue. What i find really helps me is reading it out loud or leaving it for a day or two and reading over it again: it just gives you new eyes to look it over and a day or two to think about it. i think this will super help :). Anyways i totally mean well and just want you to get better, so that's why I'm being kinda' hard. Thanks for putting the time and energy into this :)

i'm hooked

amazing job.

Well, i've really enjoyed the story so far. It's very good, well-written, & I know it's complete, but I just thought that the drama in this chapter didn't fit. It seems like she broke up with him for very little reason, & that just seems a little against her character. Like drama for the sake of drama. At the beginning you said she was a "good girl" but she hasn't really been acting it at all. This is just my opinion though.

Other than this, your story has been really marvellous & a great read so far! :)

I'm looking forward to finishing it!

A very well planned, and well-written in almost every way, aside from the rampant grammar and spelling errors that I noticed. A sequel with the kids would definitely be an interesting one.

it's an interesting story so far, but it's confusing trying to figure out who spoke, and who's thinking.

I love this story. Maybe now u could write a story about Breckin and Andy!

Wow. W.O.W. I'm speechless. Truly speechless. Marvelous story!

like omg that was so god to think i thought i had to wait like 3 weeks to get another chapter, when you only had a story for the first three chapters could have made me giddy!. gezz i have to go but i like loved your story :p

Em's

gzees like oh my god this is priceless you got to up date soon or else i'm gonna badger you till you do. it's really good but you kiinda leave words out sometimes but it's easy to figure out what you mean. but still it's a good story only if you finsh i will give you credit for your work

I love this! If it was printed, I would say that I couldn't put it down. Instead, I'll inform you that I sat in front of the computer for three and a half hours, without moving, so that I could finish it in one sitting. Keep up the good work!

~KT~

Wow. That was a long read. It's good.

Really cool story. I couldn't stop reading it till I was done actually. By the way did you ever do the story of their kids? Oh well keep on writing you are really good at it.